I.C. wrap up

I want to see the reaction of the person I share my piece with and hopefully he or she will like it. I tried to add new words to this project, so I managed to get a couple in it. It was a little dificult triying to fit everything in less than 500 words, but I tried not to write so many details and it turned out well in my opinion. I'm not sure wich sentence is my favorite; I would have to read it calmly to find it. I'm curious to see what the style is of my other classmates.