I.C. wrap up

I want to see the reaction of the person I share my piece with and hopefully he or she will like it. I tried to add new words to this project, so I managed to get a couple in it. It was a little dificult triying to fit everything in less than 500 words, but I tried not to write so many details and it turned out well in my opinion. I'm not sure wich sentence is my favorite; I would have to read it calmly to find it. I'm curious to see what the style is of my other classmates.

I.C. Reflection

I liked how my paper turned out because when I read it it sounded like a whole different person wrote it, and for me that's a good thing. When I get feedback from it then I'll see if I really did a good job on it or not depending on the errors. Like I said, after getting feedback I will check if something is mising. The language was easy because I mostly used "she" and there wasn't many characters.

poster session preference

If we share with another class that's okay but I would rather do it only in our class because it's less people so I won't get that nervous and I know them better.
Any day we do it is fine.

Individual choice brainstorm

I like writing letters to ask how another person is doing and what they are up to. Also, writing a short story made up by me would be fun. In english it would be basically the same for me. I haven't done many projects before, but one of the projects I did in writing class that I liked was the biography. Like I said, writing a short story sounds exiting and it catches my interest. I like making up random stories and putting them toguether with my imagination. I don't really know all of the genres, so I have to look them up and think about what I whant to write.

pre-argument

My main essay goals are to learn to argue my side of an idea without sounding to agresive and convencing other people to consider what I'm sugesting.
This topic wasen't a hard one, but in the begining I didn't know wich side to take; however, when I started writing about it it became clear on what side I wanted to be. I would like to improve my essay by ading maybe more advantages for the use of uniforms to show that it's better to use them instead of regular clothes.

opposing arguments

Why shouldn't students use uniforms?

First of all, they are uncomfortable, specially for girls. Most girl uniforms have a skirt, so boys tend to look and see if they can look at their underwear. Also, in therms of the weather, it can get very hot if the material is cheap. when it gets cold it can be very uncomfortable as well, mainly for girls because of their skirts. People, mostly students, think that they can't show off their personality and standout.

paraphrasing

One of the sources that I found had some of the most important reasons to wear a uniform for school. This helped me realize there are more advantages of wearing a uniform than wearing your normal clothes. Another source was agains uniforms, but it didn't give many good reasons not to wear a uniform. The sourse in my lenguage was about the economical school issues in the country and how using a uniform can help prevent spending to much money on clothes for school. By comparing all of these, I would say there are definitely more advantages that disadvantages for the use of a school uniform.