Wednesday, February 29, 2012
first emails
The main differences in these writings is that the recomendation letter is something more serious and it is a favor, so you have to be really polite because you are asking for something. The party email is something alot more easy for me to write because you can make it your own by writing silly things, making joks, and making it as simple or complicated as you want without anyone complaining because it's your party. The request for a recommendation letter was defenitely a bit harder because I was not very sure what it was and how to ask for that favor.
Monday, February 27, 2012
descriptive writing wrap-up
My favorite descripting writing project was probably the one I got to choose (choice number 2). I still need to work on that last one because I didn't get into details and I really want to explain many things that I love. This descriptive was usefull because I got some practice at descriving some places and thigs, so when I nead to descrive something eighter write it or talk about, now I have new ways to do it.
Saturday, February 25, 2012
workshopping
The good thing about workshopping is that you get to share the work with a classmate. Also, you get their opinion and ideas as well. What I don't like as much, is that many times I'm not as helpfull as people would like me to be when I'm giving them some feedback. For that same reason, I would prefer sharing with one or two people. In my opinion, I would love to feel free to ask the writer anything; however, a few examples of cuestions would also help just in case I can't think of anything to ask. I don't think I have any sugestestions, but I would feel more comfortable workshopping with woman.
Monday, February 20, 2012
something in the classroom...
I am sitting in this black holder thing. I am not alone; some of my friends are sitting here with me too. There are two green above me and one black under me(my friends). My color is blue. Not only do I have blue on me, but also white. I can give something color and make it pretty. I get used a lot during the week mostly by teachers; however, on the weekends I'm sitting here as usual with my other colorful friends.
Monday, February 13, 2012
Bio wrap-up
This project was very fun to do. I liked the fact that someone else wrote about me, I just didn't like writing about a person wich I don't know very much. However, it was still a good project. I feel like I know what I am supposed to do for my next biography, now that I wrote one and made it my own. This project halped me know some of my classmates a bit more, and the editing group really helped because the people in it were very helpfull and did not hesitate to tell me my herrors. My biography did not cover everything about me, but I still liked it a lot.
Friday, February 10, 2012
chocolate
First of all, it has an orangy taste. doesn't smell like much, but tastes great. When I open it, the wraper makes a crunchy sound, which is almost imposible to not make any noise with it. It is a bit hard when I bite it; however, once it's in my mouth, it slowly melts and vanishes into my stomach.
Friday, February 3, 2012
Biographies
Writing a biography is fun, especially if you're puting together the info about the person in your bio. A biography to me is a small description of someone's life. Obcourse, if your the author you can make it as long as you want. Writing a biography is interesting and important because you talk about someone else other than your self, and the way of writing changes somehow because your talking abour another person. When we read some biographies last class, I realized the authors were somehow writing what they thought about the person they were writing about. I like it when they talk about details and they're not afraid of saying what they think of a person. I like writing biographies. Although, if I don't know the person that much, I feel like I don't have too much to write.